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well tell me honestly what you think of this picture. I was playing around in Corel Paint Shop Pro Photo X2
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Vision Originality Technique ImpactIt's an honor to Critique your ChibiUsa Drawing. The Sailor Moon series is one of my all time favorite Anime Series. I'm sorry but I'm not familiar with the Corel Paint Shop Pro Photo X2 program. I will critique the drawing itself.
Here is my Critique: (Drawn with the Corel Paint Shop Pro Photo X2 program)
ChibiUsa - The details of her hair and dress is very good. The umbrella and bunny handle is a nice touch. I Love the expression on ChibiUsa's face, very cute and endearing. I feel that her eyes could use some work though. Her open eye seems like it's too large. Also her shoulder seems to be just a little bit too large. Perhaps you could give more definition to her shoulder and make it less round. Even though this seems to be a closeup of ChibiUsa consider doing another version of the drawing that shows off her legs and feet. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> Background & Drawing colors - I Love the swirling background. It gives the drawing an overall mystic or magical quality. I feel that ChibiUsa's skin color is too dark. I suggest toning it down to a light tan. The colors that you used on the drawing in general is fine but I feel that you could improve on it.
The blue on her dress and umbrella should match. Changing the Umbrella's blue color to the lighter color on her dress should do the trick. Their seems to be too much purple in the drawing in general. I suggest using a few shades of lighter pink in the background to show off ChibiUsa's hair better. Also you could work on the shading of the colors on both her dress and hair. More definition and making it seem like their is a light source shining from the right could add a lot to her overall look.
Overall - I Love Chibi Moon and Sailor Mini Moon. Your ChibiUsa is very cute and her facial expression is typical of Sailor Mini Moon's Personality. One thing that's missing is her constant companion, "balloon Luna". I noticed that you had it in another drawing. Having her with an umbrella instead gives her a little bit of a lolita quality which is a nice change. Keep up the good work and I hope that you both like this critique and that I gave you some ideas on how to improve it.